Tuesday, 9 May 2017

The hidden temple

Last week we did free writing to get an idea went onto pobbile365 and they have pictures and you write a story about it and this is what i wright enjoy.




We need to go on a holiday but where said jack. What about the mystery jungle we can stay at the 5 starred hotel. Ok then to the mystery jungle. They arrived there the next day. Let's explore the jungle ok. They wandered into the jungle I think I can see a stone building up ahead. It’s a temple usually there is a treasure in them. Let's go in ok. As soon as they stood in the door shut and didn’t open. So they walked in when all of a sudden a arrow went straight past max's face. Trapes said lucian their are probably more there must be more. Look a pressure plate max rold a apple over it instantly a laser beam hit the apple and split it. Come on then there was a creaking noise and a giant axe came out of the wall and smashed into the wall on the other side. Then the ground fell apart and the next thing they knew they were on a slide and landed in a room. Then one of the walls fell down. They walked on till they saw a wand and next to it a pile of gold and diamonds. They looted the temple when all of a sudden the temple started to shake the temple was going to kill apes they had to get out and fast. When all of a sudden they fell onto a slide and came out of the temple and walked back to the hotel the end!                        

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